Military anthropologist starts blogging about his experiences

Dear Lorenz,

I also had a quick look at the weblog and find it very interesting. I don’t share your opinion that its purpose is advertising the US Army, at least not after a first quick look. You explain the conclusion ("it seems that his job is doing some advertising for the US Army") by stating that most anthropologist oppose cooperation with military forces. Firstly I don’t grasp the logic of this conclusion (Just because anthropologists oppose it he is guilty if collaboration?) And secondly, your blog intends to use a journalistic approach toward anthropology, as far as I see it. Can you explain me how far this approach is compatible with biased opinions like this in news posts?

No offense, just wondering.

Best, anthro

Dear anthronaut,

yes you’re right. My blog is more journalistic than personal, but this approach doesn’t prevent me from commenting on some issues - maybe we could call it bloggy journalism?

Concerning the logic of the conclusion - yes, something must have gone wrong there, it’s corrected! Thanks!

Hey Lorenz,

thanks a lot for the answer! I know there’s a very thin line between the personal and the journalistic. I’ve been reading your blog for quite a while now and I don’t want to miss your personal opinions in your posts. But what do you think of a clear marker inside a post indicating what is personal opinion and what journalistic (As one might be used to it in newspapers) - Some kind of “the editors comment” or something.

Well, I’ll think about it. I think the most important thing is to seperate facts and opinion.

I wrote “as a quick look at his blog reveals it seems that his job is doing some advertising for the US Army” which means that the author has taken a quick look and writes about his personal impression.

But it would have been problematic if I had written “The purpose of the blog is advertising for the US Army".

Yes, you’ve got a point there. Let’s put it that way: As a quick look at your post revealed, it seemed that the author had interlaced his personal opinion with journalistic writing, but after further discussion it turned out that it isn’t as bad as it seemed. ;-)

A first quick look produces this:
1 The author offers a big deal of reflexion. He makes clear, waht his views are, his opinion is and how his perspective is.
2 It is absolutely clear, that this is a blog, a kind of journalism, and therefore biased by the author´s position.
3 To me it is clear, that the author attempts to write abour his experience and what he does presently. It takes a lot of courage to reflect tensions between the fields of military and anthropology, I think.
4 What is more worrying is that the author had to think about, if he was allowed to write.